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Meridith Baxter

and the sky split open
and the sky split open by @mitsene (Meridith Baxter)

'she could hear the rumbles of the storm approaching. caza turned from her perch on the stony cliff and started her way down. after a few steps, a bright light from behind her shined vaguely in her eye. she turned halfway to see what, and it had been the moon; the stormclouds had split open right above her; nay, behind her, so close. and as she watched, a bolt of lightening cracked across the widening breach in the clouds, across the moon, in a defeaning crack of thunder; its light, as well as the moon's, lit up the night, and all she could do was pause in awe, for even a moment.....'

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