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Julia Lichty

If you were here
If you were here by @julilich (Julia Lichty)

If you were here I know that you would truly be amazed At what's become of what you made

If you were here You would know how I treasured every day How every single word you spoke Echoes in me like a memory of hope...

When you were here, You could not feel the value that I placed On every look that crossed your face

When you were here, I did not know just how I had embraced All that you hid behind your face Could not hide from me, 'cause it hid in me too...

This song from Poe made me break down and cry like you wouldn't believe. It is truly one of the most heartbreaking songs ever written. Artwork © Copyright 2002 Julia Lichty

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Posted: Monday, 08 April, 2002 @ 02:08 AM

reads it only once over and begens to cry What happened to Poe... And this sng is so..sad and heartbreaking.. Ive seen that Poe have been off of Yahoo messenger for a whail and I am getign worryed abotu him.. Please.. if you talk to him please tell him Spaz/Niea is worryed 'bout him caus I am and I hope he gets better... E-mail me if u want to respond please or idf you have yahoo messenger I'm csmsnvgriff and on AOL i'm ae theweardone. ;.; I tis be worryed bout poor poe

Posted: Monday, 08 April, 2002 @ 02:23 AM

I don't know who you mean. Poe is a well known female singer...

Posted: Monday, 08 April, 2002 @ 02:14 AM

PS: I hope the Poe your talkign abotu is aka Invader Poe or Rose_holocaust

Posted: Monday, 08 April, 2002 @ 02:21 AM

Poe is a well known singer/songwriter. I don't know who you're talking about.

Posted: Friday, 12 April, 2002 @ 04:52 PM

Wow...this picture has a lot of emotion in it. And it's very well done...After I saw this pic for the first time, I went and downloaded the song to see what you meant. It really is sad =(

Really amazing picture. You're a great artist ^_^

http://www.side7.com/art/peney/gallery.html

Posted: Tuesday, 16 April, 2002 @ 12:48 AM

This was one of the first pics I saw of yours (in Ms. Major's forum)...I think subconsciously it inspired me to, a few months later, create an emotional piece called "Dragon" ...

You know, come to think...that yellow color in this tragic picture makes for good juxtaposation...I never realized that before. I may have to download the song you speak of...

my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill

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