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Abigail Yu

Satin Sheets and Sensuality
Satin Sheets and Sensuality by @Binkari (Abigail Yu)

New image for my site layout. Check it out at http://www.binkerville.com Artwork © Copyright 2002 Abigail Yu

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Teen (N)
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21y300d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 04 July, 2002 @ 01:08 PM

WOW! The way you did the sheets and the coloring is magnificent! ::Stares in awe:: Personally, I'm not good with paint programs.. but it looks like you have a knack for it! Good job!

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Posted: Monday, 11 August, 2003 @ 07:09 PM

I like the image--black satin bedsheets and catgirls are awsome ^_^ Now, because I think I oughta say something constructive when I comment here's the crit: The expression is good but her posture seems stiff. Like she's not relaxing on one arm...I can't explain it well but the way she's carrying herself doesn't seem natural (in the sense of comfort not outlandishness. That and though the fold in the sheets are great, they don't look convincing in some spots, and kinda flatten your figure some. The area along her thigh and hips, for example looks kind of flat--try only adding highlights only on the top or summat. The falling folds near near her leg look nic+e, but the thin+g on which she's resting looks flat (whereas the folds suggest otherwise). And the area around her bust looks more like it's wrapped around firmly, not hanging. Anyway other than that it's cool. Her fur pattern is a nice touch.

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