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Robert Clawson

Kyonpi
Kyonpi by @robeclaw (Robert Clawson)

Something I decided to do for Kris. Her pencil sketch of her furry character (which I rather liked) and my CG color. (the original sketch can be found here: http://art.goofybunnies.org) I'm pretty happy with the results. Maybe third real attempt at CG color, and first in over a year I think.

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Posted: Thursday, 15 August, 2002 @ 05:54 PM

You have a nice painterly style of CGing. Works reallly nice with the clothing. However, her facial features get cloudy and lost. I'd recommend either getting an outline of this sketch (think animation lineart), and putting that underneath, which would help define the features more, OR, just pick up a sharp-edged brush and work a little more at defining the edges in her face.

You should do more CGing, though! You have a really nice handle on it.

my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill

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