@akiratakako
takako akira

japanese girl in the white box...
japanese girl in the white box... by @akiratakako (takako akira)

i just learned how to use PHOTOSHOP 6.0... it's an OLD program.. but i' really laggy.. so sorry laa.. ehehe... this is my photoshop experience.. so please tell me what u ppl think of it... !!!

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Posted: Tuesday, 16 September, 2003 @ 03:33 PM

err... what to say... tone is too obvious... color management is good... yet didn't emphasis in shadows... my gosh... 1st time use photoshop can do this kind of things really impressive... me use to do black and white coz hard to do toning... frustration i guess...

Posted: Wednesday, 17 September, 2003 @ 07:41 AM

ehehe.... how did u know it was my first time using photoshop? i know everything in this pic is OUT... but what to do? i'm BAD on the black and WHITE section when it comes to CGing... BY the way... this PICTURE was an OLD oekaki... (online drawing i did almost 2 months ago...) i decided to retouched it using photoshop... as u can see.. the original one is somewhere in this gallery laa...~!

Posted: Friday, 18 August, 2006 @ 01:02 PM

Interesting decision in choosing to leave that much space blank. It's an interesting balance, but it's also uneven which makes it intriguing somewhat.

For your first time (and I'm not sure I believe you :P ), this is very, very good. The linework is interesting as it has a surreal quality and isn't really defined. The only suggestion I can give you is that even though you cut the picture half-way on her face, it looks like she doesn't have a second eye.

Overall, nice work.

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