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Jacqueline S. Rainey

So close...
So close... by @DarkRaine (Jacqueline S. Rainey)

I almost had everything I've ever wanted. But I let it--more like shoved it--away...

The "poem" (if you can call it that) in the backround says:

You're an idiot, how could you lose it? He loved you, and you knew it. But instead, you chose not to see. You chose to be blind, naturally. Now you're alone, and will be for life. 'Cause you let him go, like a run-away kite.

Lame...I know...Don't care...God...I almost let my self believe in love...Gah...sickening...

The cheese stands alone...

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Teen (V)
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19y193d ago
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