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Heather A

Roller boogie
Roller boogie by @Heza (Heather A)

Just a random looking girl roller skating, I know the perspective on the legs is awful, but I don't claim to be a great artist.

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Everyone
Class:
Rough / Concept
Submitted:
17y86d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 03 February, 2007 @ 06:11 AM

I like the face and expression here. I'd try slimming down and curving some of the shapes of her body. For example, make the wrist thinner before it attaches to the hand and bring the back of her half in a bit at the ankle. Still interesting piece.

-Delta-

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