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Ow
Ow by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

This is an older pic again. I wasn't going to upload it because I thought I'd gotten Marik's arms strange, but maybe they're okay. This is actually kinda disgusting . . . so much blood! Ow . . . ow . . . OW. . . . Poor Marik! @@ He was shot two times, in the chest and in the back, while trying to protect his friend Mokuba from a gang. 'Twas in a fic of mine called Fly Away.

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Posted: Monday, 26 July, 2004 @ 02:43 AM

Yeowch, shot twice? Poor boy always seems to take a lot of abuse in your pictures...ah well, abuse can be fun ^^;

The arms don't look strange, but maybe they're a bit short? The upper arm should be long enough so that the elbow reaches about the hip, and the fingertips come to nearly the knees. Or I could just be looking at them wrong.

Nice blood puddle in this one, and nice detail with the bullet hole in his back.

Posted: Tuesday, 27 July, 2004 @ 05:43 AM

XD; If you think he takes the abuse in my pictures, just wait'll you see the fics. LOL. Poor baby. I have a hurt/comfort obsession badly. ^__~

Yeah, I think you've placed the arm problem exactly right. nod.

Posted: Saturday, 31 July, 2004 @ 10:33 PM

I have a hard time writing things that don't involve blood or angst, meself. But...abuse is fun! ^^; And whenever I RP, somebody ends up dead...poor Jounouchi's already been killed off on three separate occassions...

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