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Veldos
Veldos "Pledge" by @fragmented_imagination (B Sanders)

This is Veldos from my "Alatian Chronicles". As far as he knows, he is the last of a race called the Bashra. Hence why he's standing in a poorly-sketched graveyard (I'm just bad with backgrounds). He's a type of swordsman, but you only see one of his swords when he swings it at you, making him one of my particularly deadly characters.

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Posted: Thursday, 18 March, 2010 @ 07:07 PM

I'm just wondering about the grave markers - do they necessarily have to be crosses? I always thought cross-shaped markers had connections with Christianity, and as far as I know, that religion doesn't exist in the Alatian world. Just a thought.

Posted: Friday, 19 March, 2010 @ 12:09 AM

[quote="phoenixascending"]I'm just wondering about the grave markers - do they necessarily have to be crosses? I always thought cross-shaped markers had connections with Christianity, and as far as I know, that religion doesn't exist in the Alatian world. Just a thought.[/quote]

I was just looking for something that looked like an obvious, improvised grave marker than a simple large stick or a rock.

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