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Daisy Hunt

Stay with me, Big Brother
Stay with me, Big Brother by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

This is from a fic I haven't finished yet. Both Marik and Rishid are being held captive and Marik has been very sick and delirious. In this state of mind, his thoughts send him back to when he was younger, and hence he pleads for his big brother to stay with him. And of course, Rishid always will.

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Posted: Tuesday, 13 July, 2004 @ 11:39 AM

I like your drawings! You are improving very well too, and I also wanted to tell you congratulations on the premiere account you got! ^_^ I like that picture there, it looks great! ~^

Posted: Friday, 16 July, 2004 @ 11:45 PM

While I'm here, I should congratulate you on your Premier Account upgrade as well ^_^

I must say that the hands in this one are very nice, and detailed, too...particularly Malik's curled-up one. The line on the palm is a detail quite a lot of people forget about. Good job! Might I suggest, though, that the next time you draw blood such as the blood around the two, you aim for a more...puddle-ish shape? ^^;;

Malik's hair also looks very nice, especially the part falling below his shoulders. The idea of the picture is very cute, too...reminds me of that Rishid-background scene they hacked down to nothing in the dubbed version, just because there was a knife involved...

Posted: Saturday, 17 July, 2004 @ 05:55 AM

Why, thank you. ^^

Yeah, I worked hard on that hand. XD I'm glad it came out as well as it did.

One time I actually did manage to draw blood like a puddle. o.o I was gonna post that pic, but I thought Marik's arms were out of whack. Maybe I'll post it anyway and see what others think. ^__~

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