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Daisy Hunt

Solitude
Solitude by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

In a quiet moment of solitude, even the strongest soul sometimes cannot bear the pain any longer. Such is the case with Alister here. He's looking at the locket that has pictures of his mother and brother in it and is missing them. And he allows himself a rare cry.

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Posted: Sunday, 05 February, 2006 @ 03:40 PM

Poor pinky war-orphan...

As per usual, I really like the expression on this one. The eyes are very nice, and I like the way you've done the tears (thank you, thank you, thank you for not drawing little individual drops all the way down his cheeks like some freaky clown in an emo circus). The shoulders in this picture also look better than usual. His positioning, though, looks a little bit awkward...like he's an inch from sliding off of the bed...and that probably wouldn't his help his state of mind much, all things considered ^_^; I think if you had his legs spread just a tiny bit, he'd look a bit more stabilized.

The locket is a nice touch...it's a nice, emotional picture. ^^

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