"He's dead . . . because of me." by Daisy Hunt (@Lucky_Ladybug66)
WAAAAAH!!!! Oh poor Seto . . . And Mokuba. . . . From Crime for the Holidays. Seto found Mokuba, who was kidnapped earlier, laying dead (?)in a walk-in safe and thinks that it was his fault because he wasn't able to find his brother in time. Tea is trying to comfort him. ;_;
I'd better mention that this does have a happy ending!
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