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Daisy Hunt

"He's dead . . . because of me." by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

WAAAAAH!!!! Oh poor Seto . . . And Mokuba. . . . From Crime for the Holidays. Seto found Mokuba, who was kidnapped earlier, laying dead (?)in a walk-in safe and thinks that it was his fault because he wasn't able to find his brother in time. Tea is trying to comfort him. ;_;

I'd better mention that this does have a happy ending!

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Posted: Wednesday, 22 January, 2003 @ 07:22 AM

o.o` Awwww poor Mokuba..and just look at how upset Seto is and Tea, your really good at drawing them all emotional, and it's good to know there is a happy ending.

Posted: Saturday, 07 June, 2003 @ 10:10 PM

ACK! I remember that scene...one ofthe few fics/books/short stories i've ever read hat came SOOOO close to making me cry...i ry at TV andmovies, not books or reading material GOOD PIC!

Posted: Saturday, 30 October, 2004 @ 07:24 PM

Waahh, it's so said! sniffle This scene also made me almost cry when I read this story, but the happy ending made me all warm and fuzzy inside. Great Pi!^-^

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