LOL @ Twister comment. XD
.... nodnod. Yep. Hands are a pain. XD Valon's definitely are too small. I think I figured it out after I already had the ink in place. laughs. As for Raphael's . . . pokes it I think it looks too flat, somehow. . . .
It seems that I'm not as dead as you thought by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)
XD; From a role-play with Aubrie. Valon was standing up, holding Alister's dead body, when the redhead's eyes opened. Valon thought it was a fluke and tried to close the eyes again. Alister responded with "Don't do that," Valon screamed and nearly fell down, almost dropping Alister in the process, Raphael tried to catch them both, and Alister said the title.
I think Alister looks a bit more cheerful than I'd intended. XD; He was supposed to be weary, happy to be alive, but not overly cheerful. ^^; That's just not his way.
And may I mention, the conglomeration of legs and boots at the bottom was very hard to sort out. XD;
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...from the thumbnail, for a minute I thought they were playing Twister XD;
Yes, that is quite a tangle of limbs...I applaud you on keeping them all straight. And I don't think Amelda looks too cheerful...I mean, can't blame the boy for being happy to not be dead. ^^ I think Varon's expression is my favorite, though...he looks so startled...hee...pokes his hand Careful, boy, you're creeping into the danger zone a bit XD;
The only thing I see that could use a bit of work is the hands (the dreaded hands!)...Varon's look a bit small, and Raphael's hand on Amelda's waist...er, the thumb sort of comes off as an extra finger, but I'm not quite sure what it is...maybe it joins the rest of his hand too high up,maybe? But hands are a pain, and it's impressive that you were willing to draw so many in one picture.