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Daisy Hunt

Auf Wiedersehen, Color version
Auf Wiedersehen, Color version by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

I tweaked it a bit from the B&W version... Leonhard now has the hair tuft and the hair hanging on the sides of his face is longer. I like how the hair came out. I was afraid that coloring it might ruin the texture, but I managed to keep it in.

For the explanation of the picture, look at the B&W version.

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Posted: Monday, 02 January, 2006 @ 11:03 PM

Huzzah! You took the parallelogram-advice! It's always nice to see somebody make use of constructive criticism, rather than blowing up and ripping your face off glares over at 2/3 of deviantART Just a tip, though...when you do floors, the tiles shouldn't be of a uniform size...the tiles closer to the back wall should be more 'squished' than the ones closest to the viewer...otherwise the floor ends up looking more sloping than level.

Oh! If you like texturing hair, you should definitely invest in a Micron or two...they're wonderful little pens, make insanely thin lines, and can write over colored pencil without smearing or skipping...you could pick up a dark red in size 005 and do all sorts of wonderful things to Siegfried's hair (which does look very soft here, btw) without having to worry about colors mixing.

The expressions are very nice, and the pose looks good...the arm looped around Leon might be a tad long...hm, not much I can say about this one...maybe add some drips where the blood seems to be meeting the end of his horizontal arm-bit?

...and yay, you gave Siegfried man-nipples! (which is possibly the most bizarre thing I've said all day, but anime males are always deprived of their nipples...poor anime males...)

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