@Lucky_Ladybug66
Daisy Hunt

Possible Modern Clothes
Possible Modern Clothes by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

There is a picture on Deviant Art, meant to be silly, which depicts Thief King attempting to wear the blue-striped shirt. As you might imagine, it's a disaster. XD; Does not fit. Plus, it really doesn't look good on him. He looks like some pirate or sailor with an ill-fitting shirt.

I've so far left Yami Bakura in his Egyptian clothes when he uses the Thief King form, because I can't think of anything fitting for him to wear. Here is an attempt to find something for him. I think they (at least the shirt) might be colored dark blue?

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Posted: Thursday, 25 February, 2010 @ 04:07 PM

Clearly it's a relaxed atmosphere, given the way his shirt's hanging open. XD

I really like his hair, here...it looks like you could grab it both hands and just scrunch it, and it wouldn't cause any damage to his hairstyle. It looks kind of prickly-soft...kind of like he and Roxas go to the same stylist. XD

At the risk of sounding like a perv for staring hard enough at it to notice, something about his crotch looks kind of...off. It's not so much the space between his legs, as the fact that there's a perfectly flat plane between them...it sort of makes it seem like his legs are stuck on like a Ken doll's. It might help to sort of round off the corners of the space a little.

I like all of the little details you've got worked into this...the belt buckle, the buttons on his cuffs (I was so excited to see cuff-buttons, and I have no idea why), the scar on his torso from your earlier pictures...but what really draws my eye is the scar on his cheek. Even in black-and-white, it really stands out.

Posted: Friday, 26 February, 2010 @ 12:23 AM

He probably will do that a lot. LOL.

snerks. Yeah, probably not too much would damage that already-wild hair.

nods. I wasn't very satisfied with that part. XD; I have it all inked and colored now, and I think I tried messing with that a bit more before I did so.... will have to get it out and look at it again.

I love putting in cuff buttons. X3 I'm not sure why. And the scar really did come out good in this one. Sometimes I have trouble with it.

Thanks!

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