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Don't fight over me
Don't fight over me by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

Sephiroth breaks up a fight between two local kids, from chapter 4 of God Help the Outcasts.

Sephiroth's skin tone will not cooperate. I tried to darken it and rescan the picture, but I dunno if it's even showing up much darker. And the lamppost ended up setting at the edge of the road. headdesk. Maybe it hasn't been placed on the curb yet because it was just delivered and they're getting things ready for it. XD;

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Posted: Wednesday, 03 December, 2008 @ 12:21 AM

What sort of neighborhood is it set in? Maybe the lampost-installers are just so underpaid they didn't bother to position it properly?...eriously, though, I wouldn't have noticed that if you hadn't pointed it out yourself. XD

I don't think the skin's that bad...isn't Sephiroth sort of pale in canon? If it really bothers you, though, you can darken it in Paint Shop Pro by playing with the color-levels and brightness/contrast...and if that darkens everything else too much, you can just layer the original over top of it and erase his skin in that layer so the darker skin shows through. I'm actually doing that with one of my older pictures now...I was adjusting color levels, and Jounouchi's hair turned orange. x_x

I think I like the little details best about this picture...the little rips in Billy's clothing, the little blood-smear on Sun's cheek, and especially Billy's black eye...it looks believably swollen-shut (and the morbid praise returns!).

Posted: Wednesday, 03 December, 2008 @ 12:48 AM

LOL. I think it's an average neighborhood. XD It's definitely not a ghetto, at least.

nodnod. I might have to tinker with those sometimes. X3 It doesn't bother me so bad that I'd go out of my way to change it, but it's always nice to know there's an option to try to fix it!

LOL. Poor Jou's hair. XD

I remember wanting to take special note of the little details in order to get them in place right. X3

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