@Jocarra
Jen Philpot

Commission: Ritual of Fire
Commission: Ritual of Fire by @Jocarra (Jen Philpot)

Character/Concept © Adrian Hogg

~6-8? hours Adobe Photoshop CS3.

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Rating:
Teen (N)
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Finished Work
Submitted:
14y116d ago
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Comments & Critiques (4)

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Posted: Tuesday, 19 January, 2010 @ 05:20 AM

thats awesome. great job!

Posted: Tuesday, 19 January, 2010 @ 08:44 PM

Thank you very much :)

Posted: Tuesday, 19 January, 2010 @ 05:12 PM

Beautiful lighting in this piece, the fire really jumps out and I love the ember glow beneath her feet. Although, the anatomy doesn't seem as strong as in most of your work. She's... a little lopsided up top, and her forearms and hands are a bit small compared to her upper arms and shoulders. Still, it's lovely work. The reflective shadows on the skin are very eye-catching and I like the angle on the head.

Posted: Tuesday, 19 January, 2010 @ 08:46 PM

nods I personally didn't see too much of an anatomy issue, but I can see where people have been nagging at me X3 http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i187/jocarra/RitualofFireanatomypicks.jpg - you can see that breast "lop-sidedness" exists in the photo reference as well - I've simply made them larger at the request of the client. And the forearm/hand indeed looks small, but it's actually the same size in the photo o_O I plan on tweaking it though, nonetheless, as it seems to stand out to a few people. Thank you!

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