@malvasia
Cristina Marsi

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Posted: Thursday, 08 April, 2004 @ 10:32 PM

Beautiful. The setting sunlight over the edges of the clouds and water really jumps out of the page, and the way the boat is leaning away from the storm adds to the sense of approaching danger. I love the color scheme and the ominous way you portrayed the clouds, and the waves. Very nice work.

Posted: Friday, 09 April, 2004 @ 05:06 AM

Thank you :) It is not really an open air work, since suring that storm I had no time to draw. I was on sea, on a motorboat, heading home, and the light impressed me so that later i tried to put it on paper. I'm happy with the result, although the clouds are a bit too naiv. The shape of a cloud, you see, is a bit more complicated than just a few bumps. But the light is exactly as it was :)

Posted: Friday, 16 July, 2004 @ 06:45 PM

Very cool the boat is most likely under the water now lol O_x great job and good luck on your next art stuff :p..

Posted: Saturday, 17 July, 2004 @ 03:32 AM

Lol you have very little esteem of skipper skills ;) Thanks for stopping by and commenting :)

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