I like it, I think he looks really, really good. You're art is amazing. Espically because most of the art of Oliver now that you see now, after the movie, looks a lot like Sean Biggerstaff. Good job.
As far as the gear, looks good, losing the cloak and the sweater's cut it down a lot.
How is he distorted??? Liar, he's gorgeous! The wifebeater works, yet it seems so muggl-ish, heehee. Maybe they could have different shin guards or something? Those things can be quite heavy. I love your art!