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Killer Balloon Comic (page 7)
Killer Balloon Comic (page 7) by @deaddays (John Rios)

What? Huh? Page 7 and you don't see the words THE END? THATS RIGHT BABY!! I'm going further than I've ever gone before!! Uncharted territory for me. I've never been past page 7 in comic form. Wish me luck on the last few pages! It should be about 10. Maybe 11. So, what will Mr. Bob Sagat's advice do for the killer balloon situation? Stay tuned to find out! Artwork © Copyright 2002 John Rios

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Posted: Thursday, 01 August, 2002 @ 04:00 AM

You're doing a wonderful job on this! Keep it up! Not only is the story hilarious, but I love the effects in the panels. You portray your scenes very well. Good luck on the last pages!

Posted: Thursday, 01 August, 2002 @ 05:34 PM

ALL HAIL BOB SAGAT! bows

grin That is turning out SO well...keep up the good work! I wish I could do comics that well....;.;

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