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MINI ALCANDER COMIC (page 3)
MINI ALCANDER COMIC (page 3) by @deaddays (John Rios)

Heres page 3. This reveals more of the relationship between Alcander and Rase. It's not the best page I've ever made, but It's not my worst either. The next page should be a bit more dynamic. I like the 4th panel alot. By the looks of the last panel, these guys are exactly chums, so we might see some sword action a bit later... Artwork © Copyright 2002 John Rios

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Posted: Friday, 19 July, 2002 @ 12:55 PM

0.0 drooll....... oh sorry. Haha. The inking is AMAZING. Its a wonder that you havent keeled over yet from the fewms you must inhale. xD

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