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Ag Wolf

 My Curse
My Curse by @silverwolf (Ag Wolf)

I didn't mean to kill her. She saw me when she was walk down an alley. She screamed. I try to quite her, but she backed and triped onto a can. The can cut in the head. She was still screamed. I ripped out her thraot to quite her. Her blood in my mouth burn. After that.. I ran.

This is a comic I'm making. I like this one. Hoped you do ,too!

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20y91d ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 10 August, 2004 @ 11:39 PM

.......GO JESS!! cheers What an AWESOME drawing!! Me likes....reminds me of Van Helsing... :D :D :D

~~EVN~~

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Posted: Wednesday, 18 August, 2004 @ 11:27 PM

Great picture and great story. It's very sad and gory...lol. One thing, though. If this is supposed to be a comic then you should change or enlarge the text...it's very hard to read the small red font on the picture, and without your description below I doubt I could've made out all of the words. Awesome picture, though!

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