I'm quite impressed. Excellent character design--the bone protruding is rather unexpected as you scroll down! (I think that might make this pic need a "T" rating, actually) This image flows very nicely--but it appears to be a little 'cut off' on the right side--her hand looks like it needs a little more space. The pose itself flows very well--I love how her hair looks like it's been caught in blood, almost. The wings are amazingly shaded, but the hair and skin could use a little more shading. You've really got a dynamic image here, so I would really like to see you do more with the lighting--a dark sky and background would really help her stick out, as well as some blue-ish gray shadows on her dress. Also, the lines should be darkened up and sharpened a bit--the waxyness of pencils tends to obscure them a little. Also, the skull on the background is confusing--it's hard to tell exactly where it is supposed to be sitting.

Man, sounds like a harsh critique, doesn't it? Well, I want you to know I'm very impressed by this image--the hand will eternally fascinate me--what is she pointing at? It's a mysterious question that is better left unanswered. And the title has more questions than answers, as well...

I like how colour improved this image it's incredibly disturbing- how her skin let loose of her bones... such is how one feels on some days though and she seems to be taking it well i like how her dress and the background fade into one and especially the colours you've chosen(now i'm hungry for a strawbery shortcake frozen yogurt!)