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Cristina Marsi

Alice
Alice by @malvasia (Cristina Marsi)

A portrait i did of my friends' little daughter :)

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Posted: Monday, 26 July, 2004 @ 04:10 PM

My goodness. o.o

It's gorgeous.

I'm so jealous of how you did those curls; they're beautiful. And the eyes are so expressive with the brightness in them.

I really love how you did the shirt; the folds all seem to pull and bend in the right places.

However, the skin is so very orange. o.o

However, that might just be the skin tone of the child and therefore I have no place to comment. :3

Posted: Tuesday, 27 July, 2004 @ 03:21 AM

Thanks, also on Alice's behalf ;) I'm afraid the yellowish colour that dominates in picture is scanner fault. Alice is beautifully tanned, but not orange-skinned. Maybe I should have edited picture after scanning, but usually if i mess up with colours i end up with something much worse, so i left it as it is :)

Posted: Tuesday, 27 July, 2004 @ 09:15 AM

I understand completely. Sometimes it's better just to leave it as is.

Anyway, I think it's still very good and besides, anybody with half a brain should be able to tell that you're going for a tan.

Posted: Tuesday, 27 July, 2004 @ 08:13 PM

I love the energy in those curls. And the expression in the eyes--I think we've all seen children with that look in their eyes. Very wise and very young. :3

Posted: Wednesday, 28 July, 2004 @ 05:56 AM

Thank you :) Yeah, i loved that look too :)

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