Row the Kordi carried Gorfa Dib through the woods... by Tabi Judd (@tayjudd)
This is a part of my story, where Row, a leader of sorts of the creatures trying to take over the planet Taleka, has captured Dib, taken off his clothing (for reasons currently having not really come up with a good reason yet), and is taking him to the mother ship and stuff. (Read my story on ff.net to read the whole story that isn't quite finished yet.)
I felt like rating it 'N' because I continually imply that Dib is nude. (giggles immaturely)
Read my story here: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=696991&chapter=1
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