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Row the Kordi carried Gorfa Dib through the woods...
Row the Kordi carried Gorfa Dib through the woods... by @tayjudd (Tabi Judd)

This is a part of my story, where Row, a leader of sorts of the creatures trying to take over the planet Taleka, has captured Dib, taken off his clothing (for reasons currently having not really come up with a good reason yet), and is taking him to the mother ship and stuff. (Read my story on ff.net to read the whole story that isn't quite finished yet.)

I felt like rating it 'N' because I continually imply that Dib is nude. (giggles immaturely)

Read my story here: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=696991&chapter=1

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Teen (N)
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22y16d ago
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