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Piedmont Factory: Second Floor
Piedmont Factory: Second Floor by @rollee (Rollee Bitterblossom)

The segregation within Piedmont factory between its face for display and its fetid insides was a staggering one. Its lobbies and meeting halls were pristine, complete with its own separate ventilation so that VIPs didn’t have to breathe the same petrol poisoned air the kids lived in. Lecton’s officials had their palms greased while on the other side of the factory the children subsisted on moldy bread. Godwin’s office, well lit by the sun with its wide windows, were cleaned daily, while the kids toiled in the flickering darkness and washed themselves in rusty showers and slept in stained beds.


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Posted: Sunday, 19 November, 2023 @ 03:37 PM
Rating: 5

The kids' area looks like it was just packed in together at the last minute, as you would expect of Godwin. The factory is about as two-faced as he was.

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