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Daisy Hunt

God Help the Outcasts
God Help the Outcasts by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

This picture is to go along with the sequel to the My Immortal fic. Those who read that may remember that it dealt with people starting to hate Egyptians because a madman who happened to be Egyptian was terrorizing the city. After My Immortal, the problem only got worse. This picture is the aftermath of another encounter with the racists. Ishizu is thinking the lyrics of the song.

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Posted: Thursday, 28 October, 2004 @ 05:17 PM

Ah, Disney musicals...so pretty and cheery, even when they have nothing to do with the original whatsoever X3

Isis' expression is very nicely done, and you're getting very good at drawing tears. ^^ The bruises are also very nice, as is the bloody-looking grafitti on the wall (what morbid praise this is turning out to be!)

Now, this is going to be perhaps the most ridiuclous constructive criticism I've ever given anyone...in most brick walls, the bricks aren't stacked on on top of the other, they overlap a bit...something to do with the sturdiness of the structure...but I'm sure there are some walls out there put together like this one, so it's not a problem. That said, it is a very nicely drawn wall, very detailed.

Posted: Friday, 29 October, 2004 @ 05:51 AM

XD; @ the morbid praise remark.

Thanks for the tip on brick walls! ^__^

Posted: Sunday, 31 October, 2004 @ 04:03 PM

Love the drawing- Love all your artwork and YGO fanfics. Whats's your webby cos the one on FF.net came up http://kyodai-no-kokoro.co.nr/ when I went on it. (I seem to remember a different one with Madame Daisy not Faye-Faye unless I'm getting mixed up??)

Posted: Saturday, 02 April, 2005 @ 08:01 AM

Oh dear. XD; I didn't see this until now because it was a reply and not a separate comment. ^^;

Anyway, no, you're not confused. The other website is http://www.angelfire.com/anime4/imback

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