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The Outcast
The Outcast by @yazzi (Mezz Delf)

Ok I made up a mini storyline for this one... The unicorn is outcast coz it's gasp not white (some kind of throwback). That's as far as I've got ;) Gimme sleeeeep! from doing this pic i learnt a cleaned up sketch is worth its weight in gold. i scanned a messy sketch and spent forever cleaning it up digitally. I think I also went past the point when I'm supposed to stop meddling with it and lost some detail. I'm still happy with having 3 characters in the one pic -oooh interaction falls asleep

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Posted: Wednesday, 20 February, 2002 @ 01:56 AM

Awww... Poor thing. Personally, I think blood bay with black mane and tail is much prettier than white. Anyways, I like the colors and the expressions... and the idea! Tho' something about the unicorn's proportions seems of toward his hindquarters.

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