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Rachel T.

Just Alister
Just Alister by @Thunderbird (Rachel T.)

It's... just Alister. XD I think his head look a little like a girl, but I think it's okay besides that. ^^;

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Posted: Monday, 18 April, 2005 @ 09:11 PM

Well, I know you usually draw animals, so drawing humans would be quite a switch. XD That being said, this is done quite well. ^^ I wish Alister was looking at us more, though. XD; He looks so sad, poor thing. The hair's not curled up quite enough, but it's a good first try. ^^ It looks like it did when I was first trying to draw him. Also you forgot the tuft of hair on top of his head, but that's minor. ^^;

I'm not quite sure if the head's proportions match that of the body's. . . . The neck's too short, but the arms are good. I think the left one is too short, though. ^^;

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