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Serena Marge

The Lady and the Unicorn
The Lady and the Unicorn by @seremarg (Serena Marge)

^.^ My own creation hehehe..anyways i know you might think the arm is to long, well its the dress that makes it look long, since the sleeves is way pass her hands hehe..but i think the desigh is pretty cool, also plain ^.^ oh well, i try my best, sadly I'm no major cartoon artits. hehe

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Posted: Sunday, 07 November, 2004 @ 12:29 PM

Very nice job on the unicorn's head. THe woman's hair and dress are nicely drawn, as well. I can understand that the sleeves are long in this picture, but what makes the arm look too long is that the elbow's too far down her arm. Minor issue, though. The unicorn's wing behind her could use a little work, too, but I know those are hard, and you're off to a good start. Study bird wings to get an idea of how the feathers are put together. The woman's face and body are drawn nicely. Good work.

Posted: Wednesday, 10 November, 2004 @ 01:24 PM

Keep on working. You have a lot of promise, and I know that if you work hard enough you're going to be awesome. So don't give up! I really like the design of this one, her dress is very cool. The bottom is too round, though--give it some undulations to show that it's falling down in folds, rather than one stiff piece. Same with the sleeves. The bodice is very nicely drawn, I love the design. The unicorn is also impressive, though it needs some shading on its wings. Try for a light blue to suggest white! And don't give up, keep on working!

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