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Jessica A. Kadikoff

Playful Punks
Playful Punks by @mooch (Jessica A. Kadikoff)

This pic was drawn in the style of "The Lion King" don't ask me why. I thought it was really cute so I decided to make it fit my needs and make them both punks. Yes I like it. ^^ Artwork © Copyright 2002 Jessica A. Kadikoff

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Posted: Tuesday, 02 March, 2004 @ 08:23 PM

Heh, normally I don't really like punky-looking pictures overmuch, but this one is one cute/edgy acception. Those little punk lions are so cute. The expressions and poses are adorble, and the punky gear actually suits them rather well. One thing, though, are those spiked bracelets/anklets/tail thingies. The spikes are fine, they look great, but the bracelets themselves look like they're embedded in the lions' markings. a way to fix that would be to make the width of the bracelets slightly wider than the width of whatever body part they're on, making it look like they're wrapping around the lion, and in the case of these furry critters, put some tufts of stray fur near the things.

Anyhow, great pic. Keep drawing!

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