I managed to get back to the scans yesterday and have cleaned up the characters. I can get to coloring them now.
Thank you. Go ahead and send whatever you've thought of. I may or may not have already dealt with it.
I have revised a few chapters. The Prologue is to be mostly rewritten. My first rewrite removed Solomon's flashbacks, but still has too much focus on his apprentice before Baksrit. Therefore, I intend to rewrite the rewrite to keep it focused on Solomon meeting Baksrit.
Another chapter which has received a major rewrite is the one after the execution, where Baksrit and Jaims discuss Baksrit's reaction. I replaced Jaims with Deidrei so I could develop her character more, especially since Deidrei becomes a major character. I also added Baksrit helping Matreen clean up the drunken Deidrei at the end of the chapter.
I also added to the end of the last chapter (not the Epilogue), so that Deidrei asks Baksrit for spellcasting lessons (instead of Baksrit telling Deidrei she needed to learn them) and that Baksrit sees Songern for a reason other than to tell him not to call her "little bit" (she wanted more information on what happened to Solomon, but Songern knows little more than what he told her underground).