Hello,
I have always been interested in becoming a comic book artist and I decided to do a redrawing of a page from the old Sonic the Hedgehog Archie Comics on my manga paper just fro the sake of practice. This from the story "First Star I See Tonight" written by Mike Kanterovich and Ken Penders.

I was wonding if anyone would like to critique it. I would like to know if there is anything I need to improve in my comic book pinciling skills. If anyone would like to red line it, go ahead, that would be awesome! ^^

Here's the link.

http://www.side7.com/image.cgim?imageid=332230&from=recent_uploads

Thank you!