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DYOS 10.5: Plans Within Plans

Alibi
Alibi by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 50th submission to DYOS X.ii. [link]
Previous working title: "Parting Ways"

Once upon a time I used to go camping. I can attest that they make backpacks that large. There are a lot of panels I like in this, but like so much else, the ones I don't are enough to relegate this to Scraps.

Y'know it's only now I realize Marsha was hired to find Krieger so Kusanagi could get intel on Toyoda, and here she almost had the source.

I had seriously considered depicting the ensuing fight, but decided against it as a) it wouldn't really advance the story, and b) would deny the audience that tiiiiny window for conjecture in my subsequent cartoon.

choxorn © himself;
Marsha Conrad © @GenMarshall;
All other characters © me.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt January 2014.]


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