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Rollee Bitterblossom

Who's Next in the Factory of Madness?
31 Aug 2023, 08:11 PM

Coming to Side 7 really motivated me forward in my Factory of Madness stuff. I would like to thank everyone here for that! On that note, I’m planning my next set of characters and I would like people’s input on what they would like to see.

There are 31 kids in Piedmont Factory, and though I will eventually finish them all I thought it would be fun to check with the community on who they would like to see next. These are who I have been considering for my next piece (in no particular order)

1) Kelsey Bridget - The beautiful ghost girl who was cripplingly sick in life but was “cured” after coming back as a ghost. Convinced that death is the answer, she now kills to free people from the agony of living.

2) Lillian Grant - Lilly’s OCD has completely consumed her in death and she has become obsessed with keeping the enormous factory clean, an ultimately impossible task. She does everything from mopping the floors and disposing of the bodies.

3) Simon Shaw - This albino hemophiliac is mostly harmless, but no less haunting to see. He eternally wanders the hallway painting a crimson trail behind him as he is unable to stop his own bleeding wounds no matter what he does.

4) Jerry and Larry Manders - These psycho twins just want to play some games. Win or lose, you can be assured it’s going to be excruciating.

5) Rheena Craft - The infamous Blood Haired Butcher. One of the most violent ghosts in Piedmont. She hangs her victims from the rafters and flays them alive. Cruel and simple.

Who would you like to see next? In addition to these individual character arts is there anything else you would like to see regarding Factory of Madness? Leave in the comments

Comments (3)

Posted: Thursday, 31 August, 2023 @ 11:36 PM

Kelsey. Definitely would like to see Kelsey next. It would also be interesting to see how this factory is laid out.

Posted: Saturday, 02 September, 2023 @ 04:35 AM

@fragmented_imagination: A layout of the factory is a good idea. I have been working on a very rudimentary blueprint, ill have think about making it more presentable. Ill put it on my to do list

Posted: Friday, 01 September, 2023 @ 02:47 AM

All of these characters have me grinning with excitement. Rheena will get my vote, though. She seems.. well, kind of relatable.

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