So yeah, I've got the first five chapters of MHO up at the time of this journal. I finally found a way to bulk-convert the odt files into html, so uploading here is a bit more feasible now. So now it just remains to be seen if it's worth it. I'm thinking maybe I'll post the rest of the first episode, Strangers in a Strange Land, then wait to see if anyone pays it any attention, heh. So please, if you're reading it, do leave a like and comment!
As a quick heads up, MHO is definitely geared towards a mature audience. It's not smut, obviously, although it does have a very small number of (usually brief) explicit scenes. There's also a fair amount of (sometimes intense) violence and plenty of strong language. That said, I have no intention of making it "gritty" or anything like that. Rest assured that it is, overall, a fantastical adventure story with a slow-burn romance subplot. Any mature content ultimately serves that purpose. Sexy scenes are meant to demonstrate characters' attraction to one another and the sexual tension between them, and any violence serves plot purposes.
I DO have versions of a couple chapters that skip the more explicit scenes, particularly in Strangers in a Strange Land. I haven't decided which versions I'll upload here. Unless someone requests them, I'll probably just stick to the full, original versions. So if you're interested in the story but don't want to read a couple brief lewd scenes, please let me know, so I can upload the comparatively 'clean' versions as well! (Chapter 6 is the first one to have such a scene, hence why I'm pointing this out now.)
I'll warn upfront, my average engagement is pretty poor even amongst close friends, though my work's esoteric at best and stretched over a dozen themes, so I'm not a good benchmark for popularity. :P What you've written is wholly competent; my impression is the active userbase tilts decidedly to creators over consumers, so don't be discouraged by lack of an audience—they haven't found us yet.
P.S.: Tsundere, or tsunDEER? :^D